Sex: that's NOT how it works!
Jun. 24th, 2011 05:11 pm So, as much as I like to giggle at weirdly written fic, I do make certain allowances for the fact that hey, it's fiction, and as a writer you have a bit of a creative licence. But some people just take it that bit too far. Especially in smut, there are certain basics (and, hello, anatomy!) that it's good to follow if you don't want your fic to be ridiculous/horrifying. I found a prime example this morning. I want to call troll, but it actually seems like it is legit fic. :S
NSFW, and not for the fainthearted, either.
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NSFW, and not for the fainthearted, either.
( NSFW NSFW NSFW )